People in the current generation are not fit and active, which will cause dangerous problems in the future. Write about what could be the reasons and suggest solutions for this issue.
Nowadays, people laziness in the age group is becoming increasingly which would have dangerous effects in the coming future. This essay will discuss why these are happening and put forward several solutions to the problem.
To start with, there are numerous reasons why people are unfit and inactive at present. The prime reason is that people like to eat readymade very often which is unhealthy because the majority of the restaurants have unhygienic conditions in their kitchen areas. In addition, it is generally agreed that they prepare very oily cousins which lead to heart problems; therefore, it is highly recommended to avoid outside food in a bid to become fit and healthy. A further reason is that kids would like to spend most of their time on the screen like watching a movie, chatting over WhatsApp, etc. which is a worrying trend. A recent article suggests that high levels of screen time are associated with a variety of health problems among children’s such as obesity and sleep disorder.
In return, I would like to highlight the proactive solution to the problems mentioned above. Firstly, it is advisable to eat homemade food as its healthy and less expensive than the readymade ones. It is generally believed, for example, that cooking at home contributes to a healthy diet because people would have control on diet to reduce calories consumed. The second solution is that people ought to join fitness clubs as they have qualified trainers to provide valuable advice about diet plans and exercise. Also, this would enable people to experience a vast array of workouts including swimming, and aerobic exercises to keep the body healthy and make the lungs and heart stronger.
In conclusion, I strongly support that the present generation to avoid processed food and reduce their screen time, they should eat healthily and balance diet at home, and start workout regularly to keep themselves healthy and active in their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1308411215 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58899309757 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573208722741 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3860124614 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.642857143 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19834880812 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666084635418 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039516432319 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115986322839 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649551756667 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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