Write a letter to a friend inviting him to go on vacation with you. Include
Why you want to go on holiday
Where you want to go
Why you want him to come with you
Dear Alex,
I hope you are doing fine today.
I am writing this letter to invite you for a holiday trip to Canada next week.
As you are aware that I have been extensively working for the past six months on a new proposal, and I am happy to let you know that we got the project due to our competitive rates in the market. Therefore, I am free now for a couple of weeks and would like to spend some time to rewind the stress from a daily routine. I plan to visit Manitoba, Canada as I am about to submit my application for the provincial nomination program so, this trip would help me to witness the indigenous culture, medical and educational facilities out there. Also, I got to know that there are a plethora of worth seeing places to visit for the new immigrants.
I would you to join me for the visit as you had spent three years in Manitoba province for a master's degree. Therefore, I could visit maximum places, and find out the appropriate community to live with a family with your help subsequently, you could meet up with your friends in the province after a long time.
I look forward to hearing from you to make a plan and book flight tickets accordingly.
Your friend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, look, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42533936652 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51855382469 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579185520362 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.0089224645 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224587125793 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968739416304 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739321615385 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152928565887 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568647074995 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.