Some people believe that entertainers are more important than scientists? Do you agree or disagree? Support with reasons and examples from your experience
These days the importance of entertainers’ versus scientists is debatable. It is often argued that performers are more important and have a huge weight over scientists. Although I agree with the statement above that entertainer plays an important role nowadays, I presume scientists are also vital and should be given equal importance.
To start with, there are several logical reasons why entertainers are important. Firstly, these days people are engaged in a busy schedule and don’t have time to relax their mind; therefore, entertainer helps them to rewind stress and divert their attention from robust routine to enjoy and relax. For an instant, I got exhausted preparing the contents of my presentation last week which I was due to present on Monday, so I decided to watch laughter’s show over the weekend which helps a lot to relax my mind to perform well. Secondly, it is often claimed that performers bring families together in their leisure time which was restricted due to non-availability of entertainment events consequently, it helps family members to build strong bonds. Finally, the entertainment industry opens the door of employment opportunity both in mass and web media entertainment for people to uplift their standard of living, hence performers are a critical part to run the industry successfully.
On the other hand, scientists are also critical because they help people to understand the functionality in every specific way. Moreover, scientist work leads to a solution to many daily problems that enrich and expand our lives. Finding a cure for life-threatening diseases and a clean form of energy are just two topical examples. In addition to that, It is generally believed that scientists help in research-work to develop new technology to perform the critical task within budget. The knowledge that scientists gather can be utilized by doctors, engineers, and others in the real scenario to uplift their career ladder.
In conclusion, I am of the view that entertainers are important as they help us to make happy, build strong family relationship, and generate employment opportunities, I presume scientists should be given equal importance because they are the ones who give us the leads to generate product to cure diseases and develop cutting-edge techniques to do efficiently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1979.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3777173913 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17863239814 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573369565217 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.9555079804 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.357142857 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7857142857 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191398927934 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681854650722 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477918523327 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117241546339 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507257732451 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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