Write a letter to a colleague asking for assistance setting up equipment for an upcoming presentation of yours. Include
What the presentation is about
The equipment needed
Suggestions to set it up
Dear Saad,
I am writing this letter to ask for your help in setting up the mandatory equipment for my presentation next week in the main conference room.
As you are aware that I just came from the recruitment trip after one week so, I have to give a presentation to the management about the outcome of the tour such as how many candidates we hired, total interview conducted, and rejections. Therefore, I am need of one mick, projector, and laptop to highlight the numbers in graphics as it will make them easy to understand the statistics. I must say that the trip was very fruitful, and we got to hire a total of 35 candidates for the key critical positions. Hence, I want to give them a thorough presentation with accurate numbers.
Could you please help me to set up the projector straight in front of the screen and laptop on the right corner so, I could see them while giving my presentation as it would help me to answer their question easily.
I look forward to a positive reply to catch up
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 516, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for the key critical positions. Hence, I want to give them a thorough presentatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, look, so, therefore, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52717391304 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7373991682 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614130434783 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.1538329776 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 76.5299724578 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 16.8248392259 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272115575514 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110926859971 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125912394186 0.0603063233224 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17556168037 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15249868047 0.0580467560999 263% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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