You have a problem with a neighbor. Write a letter to your neighbor. i your letter. Describe the problem. say how long it has been a problem. Explain what action you want the neighbors to take

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You have a problem with a neighbor. Write a letter to your neighbor. i your letter. Describe the problem. say how long it has been a problem. Explain what action you want the neighbors to take

Dear Mr. Paul,

My name is Alex, a resident of house no. 18 which is located next to your flat. I am writing this letter to express my problems because of your vehicle’s parking which often spotted in front of my house.

I am going out early morning to drop my kids at school as their timing has recently been changed due to the winter. However, I am unable to take out my car out from the garage because you have been parking the vehicle in front of my main gate for the last two weeks which often leads us to a delay in reaching the school. Due to this, my kids have received a warning letter yesterday to reach school on time otherwise, they would be charged with $100 fine. Besides, we had an emergency last night when my kid starts vomiting midnight and we must rush to the hospital very quickly. However, I couldn’t able to take out my car because of the above-mentioned problem, and barely managed via booking a ride on Uber.

I would appreciate it if you could park the vehicle in your designated spot, so we don’t have to face a similar problem in the future.

Thank you for understanding this matter, I hope you will give a though, and take care next time.

Yours sincerely,

Alex

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ough, and take care of going forward. Yours sincerely, Alex
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52466367713 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53262013991 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627802690583 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.5896972381 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7272727273 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186061556426 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761126032428 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553669426601 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127086716454 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334829313616 0.0580467560999 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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