You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of your study plans, explain why you want to get a part-time job, suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Chris,
I hope you are doing fine today.
I am writing a letter to let you know that I am coming to Manitoba, Canada for my post-graduation; therefore, I would need some help from you to settle down in the city.
Let me explain to you in more detail. I have recently got admission in Manitoba University for my post-graduation degree. It’s a two years program consist of 8 semesters, and the total cost would be $25,000. Due to the hefty fee, my initial plan was to study the first year as a full-time student and then continue the study with a part option, but it won’t work as the Canadian Government doesn’t issue the work permit visa to students with part-time study. So, I will a full-time student, and completed my degree within time.
Now, my elder brother is helping me with tuition fees which are already on a higher-end; therefore, I would need a part-time job to manage my day-to-day expenses including accommodation, transportation, and glossary during studying to avoid more burden on his pocket.
It would be better if you could let me know available job boards in Manitoba to apply online. Also, would that be possible for you to circulate my profile within your circle as you have lived there for a long time, so your reference would be much helpful to grab a part-time job?
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Your friend,
Alex
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...lp from you to settle down in the city. Let me explain to you in more detail. I ...
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...and completed my degree within time. Now, my elder brother is helping me with...
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... to avoid more burden on his pocket. It would be better if you could let me k...
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...uch helpful to grab a part-time job? I look forward to hearing from you soon....
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...ook forward to hearing from you soon. Your friend, Alex
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, then, therefore, as to, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80809676071 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619834710744 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.4137175071 44.8134815571 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1666666667 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358226345813 0.216113520407 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136486767209 0.0766984524023 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965455501177 0.0603063233224 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173336756086 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850337337645 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.