Dear Peter,
I hope you are doing fine. I am glad to share this news with you, that, I will be moving to Toronto, Ontario next month, for pursuing higher studies. I am also planning to work during my education. So, I was wondering if you could help me in searching a job there.
I got enrolled in a 2- year Project Management course at the York University, Toronto, Ontario and it will start from 1st of September, 2019 onwards. The time schedule for my classes will be from 9am-4pm Monday to Thursday.
I took huge amount of education loan and I need to work in order to pay installments on time, so that I don't face any penalties in future. I also don't want my family there to get bothered from this loan that I have taken.
It would be of great help if you can just gather some employment related newspapers and possibly note down the details of any store, cafe, food shops, etc. ( preferably near my institution). I am ready to work anywhere for any profile provided the timings should not clash with my college hours. I hoping to hear from you soon.
See you soon!
Thanks very much!
Adam
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Peter, I hope you are doing fine. I am glad to ...
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... glad to share this news with you, that, I will be moving to Toronto, Ontario nex...
^^
Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ext month, for pursuing higher studies. I am also planning to work during my educ...
^
Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'September 2019'.
Suggestion: September 2019
..., Ontario and it will start from 1st of September, 2019 onwards. The time schedule for my class...
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Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... to pay installments on time, so that I dont face any penalties in future. I also do...
^^^^
Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...time, so that I dont face any penalties in future. I also dont want my family there to ge...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 147, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...nt face any penalties in future. I also dont want my family there to get bothered fr...
^^^^
Line 7, column 223, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hered from this loan that I have taken. It would be of great help if you can jus...
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Line 9, column 156, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ils of any store, cafe, food shops, etc. preferably near my institution. I am rea...
^^
Line 9, column 295, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...should not clash with my college hours. I hoping to hear from you soon. See yo...
^
Line 12, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n. See you soon! Thanks very much! Adam
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46305418719 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41695781279 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674876847291 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9792850646 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6923076923 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6153846154 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.923076923077 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187836568665 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703861185152 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612460994195 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990660850973 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716983494202 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.