You are a unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increasing the number of flights were you live near the airport.Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter.-Explain where you live-Describe the problem-Give reason why do not

Essay topics:

You are a unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increasing the number of flights were you live near the airport.

Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter.

-Explain where you live

-Describe the problem

-Give reason why do not want his development

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to convey my disappointment regarding the proposal to expand Lahore’s airport premises to enable most flights to land from diverse regions including North America, and Europe.

I have read about an article yesterday where I came to know that the provisional government is planning to increase the existing airport capacity by constructing new runways and passenger lounge to increase the flights' traffic at the maximum level.

Being a resident of the Defense society which is located next to the airport boundary. I would oppose to this plan as we are already facing a couple of problems due to noise pollution, and traffic conjunction in the area. Besides, there are chances that the authorities could ask the nearby residents to vacate their houses because of the expansion of the airport boundaries. That’s why I am not in favor of this plan to execute at all as it will double our problems.

I would appreciate it if you could give a space of this article in your newspaper, so the residence of my society could get a chance to read it and raise their voices to stop the plan to carry out.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93236714976 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76304853554 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628019323671 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.8717421847 44.8134815571 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.625 76.5299724578 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.875 16.8248392259 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217711351878 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842071380545 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474238971473 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997845037151 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246638066451 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 8.37731958763 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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