A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. you have had a similar problem in the past. write a reply to your friend. In your letter: 1. tell your friend you understand the problem. 2. explain what happened to you in the past.

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A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. you have had a similar problem in the past. write a reply to your friend. In your letter: 1. tell your friend you understand the problem. 2. explain what happened to you in the past. 3. suggest possible solutions to the problem

Hi Adex,

I hope you are doing fine today.

I have just received your letter asking for my advice to solve the problem that you have been experiencing to open the requisition due to the new system.

Well, I had encountered a similar problem with the new system earlier because I was missing a couple of fields that need to be completed with a piece of appropriate information. Therefore, it didn’t allow me to open available positions within my department. Since I have an experience of how to solve the above-mentioned issues, so I can understand your problems very well, and help you out to ease with few steps to follow. Firstly, I would like you to make sure that the field contains the information about the recruiting start date and target hire date should be filled otherwise, the system won't allow you to proceed with the requisition. Finally, the grade should be assigned to the position in the system because the system will automatically calculate the budgeted salary per the grading system. Therefore, in the absence of grade, it will show you the error, and block the request.

Please let me know if you need any more help.

Yours truly,

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87562189055 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74989845923 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616915422886 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.1953986106 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.888888889 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275019692396 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111664906815 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832051950751 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170869882814 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765604526808 0.0580467560999 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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