A serious problem affecting countries right across the globe is the lack of water for drinking, washing and other household uses. Why do many countries face water shortages, and what could be done to alleviate the problem?
These days, water scarcity is increasingly at an alarming rate. Some environment scientists pointed out that people are facing a shortage of water across the globe due to various reasons. This essay will discuss why most counties are having a shortage of water and put forward several solutions to this problem.
To begin with, multiple reasons why most countries are facing water scarcity. The prime reason is that the population increases at a massive rate across the globe; therefore, to cater to the housing need, most counties have expanded urban areas by deforestation. Due to which, counties today are having drought periods with no rainfall, as a result, water scarcity is prevailing in most countries. A recent article suggests that 30% of the area in Australia is covering with drought because of the expansion of urbanization, thus people in northern Australia are struggling to find water for household chores. A final reason is that people in most counties are not aware of the consequences of the shortage of water; therefore, they don’t pay attention while using it for household activities. A good example of this is that people often wash their cars very often, and waste a hefty amount of water without caring for the importance of its usage.
On the other hand, there are two primary solutions which are highly recommended for the countries to adopt to overcome this problem. Firstly, the countries to avoid deforestation, and consider vertical expansion to tackle the housing requirement. It is often claimed, such as, that Highrise towers are the best option to accommodate most people within a nominal area of the land. Finally, countries should launch media campaigns to the aware general public about the importance of water, increase water tariff, and impose a hefty fine for when of over usage of water. In Additional, they should prepare a holistic water master plan because this strategy will help them out to check the entire life cycle of the water in the countries starting from its source to distribution, economic usage, recycling, and reuse, and finally return to the natural environment.
In conclusion, although there are a plethora of reasons that restrict the water supply in the countries, I presume that general awareness among people, comprehensive water master plan and construction of vertical infrastructure projects could help to solve this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2030.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23195876289 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78097799559 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54381443299 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9503744048 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.333333333 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8666666667 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275464112016 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968745242131 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528841679901 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172269434042 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292121641131 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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