One of your friends ask you to be a partner in his new business. Write a letter to reply him:- give your opinion about your friend's business idea- tell him whether or not you have decided to accept his offer- and explain your reason for this decision
Dear Baha,
I hope you are doing fine today.
I am writing this letter in response to your invitation to join you with a business proposal to start importing potatoes.
It looks like that it will be a lucrative idea to start perishable import business here in Dubai as there is a huge demand for white potatoes due to the presence of fast-food chains, and Arabic cuisines to serve with potato fries in very second restaurants across the country. Since I have available funds in hand and considering a huge potential to start a business here Dubai, I would definitely like to accept your invitation to move with the above-mentioned plan.
Now let me tell you why I have decided to partner with you in the proposal to import potatoes. Firstly, I was planning to initiate my business for quite a long time due to the job market but I didn’t find the reliable person to trust on which is an essential part to take initiative. Secondly, we have a family business in a vegetable market back home; therefore, I could get help in finding cost-effective bread of potatoes to supply as well as manpower support for packing and shipping.
Please let me know your free time to catch up, and discuss the plan in detail to move the matter forward.
Your friend
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74887892377 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69532467078 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614349775785 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.352938754 44.8134815571 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.375 76.5299724578 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.875 16.8248392259 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 4.34317383033 219% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2384890846 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12930044392 0.0766984524023 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12276366341 0.0603063233224 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112671756685 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537097032523 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 8.37731958763 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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