Culture is turning similar around the world? What are the reasons? What are the positives and negatives aspects?
In Modern times, Overlapping culture is the latest phenomenon. It is often argued the world has now become a global village and it has its own merits and demerits. This essay will discuss significant changes happened in world societies due to that and throw light on benefits it has bought to the human race.
To commence with, there are many reasons for a unified culture across the globe thou primarily two are the major contributors to it. Firstly, the communication revolution in twenty century which has faded geographical distances and boundaries and bought everyone connected and hitched to a new trend we call social media, Information technologies have brought a paradigm shift in the way we communicate and connect with each other for example people in Australia can attend a live seminar in the remote village of Kenya with an immersive experience. Secondly, the mode of transport is very much convenient at this juncture, thus people migrate from one country to another where they adopt a new culture and the other way around. Several studies attest to the fact that over 800,000 people migrated between 2016 – 2018 to Canada, and this great migration has profound impacts on Canadian’s culture.
Moreover, there are certain persuasive arguments in favor of homogenous culture, It is a melting pot in which all the attribute such as values, diversity, etc from a different culture mingle with each other creates an infusion, which is much evolved and inclusive from original ingredients hence created a distinct yet acceptable new culture with common understanding and rooted reflective values, For an instant, Starbucks acceptability has located it across the world; therefore, morning’s coffee will be the same no matter whether someone is sipping it in Tokyo, Dubai, or New York. In addition to that, it is widely claimed that the connected world gives the privilege to explore different religious and spiritual paths that were previously out of reach due to geography restrictions. On the contrary, the significant negative impact of the unified culture is that people will lose their deep-rooted culture and value due to emergence of globalization culture, as a result, they will stay away gradually from their ancestor’s ideology.
In conclusion, I presume gravitas of new evolved culture which is unified is far more relevant in current times as it brings common values and knowledge to any progressive societies. This is inevitable and next level of evolution in the history of human Civilization.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2149.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2800982801 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93085688223 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 680.4 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.112288897 49.4020404114 294% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.083333333 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.9166666667 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.25 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103109925618 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391243092411 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268827819041 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0591864057792 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220590773933 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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