Some people prefer to live in hot climates, whereas others love the lifestyle in countries with a cold climate. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Living in summer versus winter climate is debatable. It is often argued that people give preference to live in hot weather, whilst some people have the opposite opinion and wanted to spend time in countries with cold weather. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and give evidence about why summer weather is superior.
To start with, there are certain persuasive arguments to live in the summer climate. The first viewpoint is that people get the opportunity for outdoor activities and get vitamin D naturally via the sun’s light; therefore, their energy level increases and bones become stronger to live healthy lives. Moreover, it is often claimed that death rate has recently been increased in the UK due to cold weather and over 30% people would like to relocate to countries with hot weather to avoid life-threatening diseases including skin cancer, and heart problems. In addition to that, a further argument is that people living in hot climate could save a hefty amount by avoiding buying expensive clothes such as Jacket, Cloves and Hoodie. A final version is that it saves energy consumption while living in a hot climate where people do not need to switch on the heating system and boiler to live.
On the other hand, people give equal justification to live in a winter climate. Firstly, living in a hot climate is much easier to live and often leads to a positive impact on an individual’s mood and behavior. The second explanation is that people are fond to witness snowfall session; therefore, they will get the opportunity to experience snow session while living in countries with cold temperature. Finally, it is generally believed that people could easily live and adjust themselves by putting winter clothes, designed to keep the body’s temperature at an optimal level.
In conclusion, I am of the view that people ought to live in counties with a hot climate, they will not even prevent illnesses which usually occurs in winter session but also would be able to save money and energy to protect the environment.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04360465116 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70114927566 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561046511628 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.8508701858 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.461538462 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4615384615 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340229105313 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124942867745 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077485081268 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211601129285 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583240099794 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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