You are attending a night course in the school. you are not happy with some parts of the course. Write a letter to the school director about this.
In your letter, you should tell:
what course you are studying
what things you are not happy about
what you expect from the school director.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to provide my feedback regarding the course that I am currently studying in your prestigious school.
I did submit my application and got admission in the course of effective negotiation skills which was designed for executive professionals. At the time of application, I was informed by your admission staff that the course would consist of total 5 classes over the weekend due to busy schedule of the professionals, and each class would have a one on one demo interview to implement the bookish knowledge into a practical environment to know the real impact of the above-mentioned course. Nevertheless, I have attended three classes as of now, but the instructor didn’t arrange a demo interview that was communicated at the start of the course; therefore, I couldn’t able to determine the real value of this course. In addition, it was agreed that the classes would be held during the off days of the week; however, the school did schedule the recent class in the working day due to non-availability of the instructor, and they didn’t notify to me for the new schedule, as a result, I couldn’t able to attend it.
In the end, I would appreciate it if you could please check with the staff members why the practical interviews are not being held yet, and restrict them to inform of any change in schedule to the members of the class via phone, so they won't miss any lecture in future.
I look forward to hearing from you soon to sort out these issues.
Best Regards,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 260, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ia phone, so they wont miss any lecture in future. I look forward to hearing from y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 26.3917525773 167% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 263.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8897338403 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00301765755 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577946768061 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 16.3608247423 226% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.31872877 44.8134815571 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 183.714285714 76.5299724578 240% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 37.5714285714 16.8248392259 223% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.5714285714 4.34317383033 289% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151193818652 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062774766859 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487364825629 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106558264302 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386527804064 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 8.37731958763 244% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 70.7449484536 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 7.45979381443 221% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 8.54432989691 197% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 8.15463917526 208% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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