Some people agree that children should ask for a parent's advice. Some Disagree. Discuss both views and share your own opinion.
Children to take advice from their parent is debatable. Some people believe that children should consult their parent in order to take any decision while others have the opposite opinion. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and provide evidence as to why the parent’s advice is beneficial.
To commence with, advocates of obtaining parent’s advice argue that parent knows the ins and outs of their children; therefore, they will give appropriate advice to their children in accordance with their ability. A good example is that Doctor will not always give advice to his son to become a Doctor because he knows the capability of his son that he doesn’t have an aptitude to succeed in the medical field. A further reason is that parents have the ability to see the whole picture as they have experience and lived through tough phases of life, so they can give advice with a great outside perspective, and it won’t be influenced by media.
On the other hand, despite all the above-mentioned viewpoints, people give equally justification against parent’s advice. Firstly, parents have a soft heart that will restrict them to give the advice to accomplish a dangerous job. A recent article suggests that 80% of parents won’t allow their children to join army even though they have the credential to uplift their career. A final reason is that children to avoid taking any advice from their parents with regards to their field to study, this is due to that fact that parents have limited knowledge about latest technological advancement; therefore, taking advice would be a disaster for children.
In conclusion, I strongly support the idea that children to take guidance from their parents as they know them from day first and have the potential to give better advice considering their strength and weaknesses which would enable them to perform well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, therefore, well, while, as to, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15806451613 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71998041249 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532258064516 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.8012965678 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.363636364 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1818181818 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145728808862 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074536974027 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594182021399 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109748988229 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791662338056 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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