You are attending a night course in the school. you are not happy with some parts of the course. Write a letter to the school director about this.
In your letter, you should tell:
what course you are studying
what things you are not happy about
what you expect from the school director.
Dear Mr.Smith,
My name is Valli, and I pursuing a night course in your esteemed institution. It has been a month since the course starts, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about certain aspects of this course.
Firstly, I am doing my evening classes on Simulation of Automotive industries which involves the concepts of manufacturing done in the past along with the futuristic view. Certainly, I am learning this course to gain knowledge about the earlier simulation methods used in car production. Similarly, it imparts knowledge about the software used for this simulation, while
However, these aforementioned requirements are not completely covered by our tutor. During class hours, she failed to explain the software required for this simulation process as well as the current version of it. Moreover, the user-manual which explain the usage of this application and the relative documents where obscure, hence it is hard to follow her instructions. Finally, even her teaching methods could be more constructive and effective.
As you are the headmaster of this school, would you please have a discussion about these issues with her? Since it would be more effective rather than students words. More precisely, please explain that these issues are similarly faced by each student of her classroom and ask her to provide a detailed explanation for each topic she covers by providing suitable documents.
I am looking forward to seeing positive results and thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Valli
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Smith
Dear Mr.Smith, My name is Valli, and I pursuing...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr.Smith, My name is Valli, and I pursuing a night...
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Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...r Mr.Smith, My name is Valli, and I pursuing a night course in your esteeme...
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Line 9, column 371, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...software used for this simulation, while However, these aforementioned requiremen...
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Line 17, column 107, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...discussion about these issues with her? Since it would be more effective rather than ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, hence, however, look, moreover, similarly, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 937.175257732 141% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45041322314 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99982924178 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628099173554 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 290.88556701 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4511588396 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.461538462 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 4.34317383033 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18569391144 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667006547104 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936188288092 0.0603063233224 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101742632849 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054197471006 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 8.71597938144 164% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 41.2886597938 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.