You are attending a night course in the school. you are not happy with some parts of the course. Write a letter to the school director about this.
In your letter, you should tell:
what course you are studying
what things you are not happy about
what you expect from the school director.
Dear sir
I am writing this letter regarding night course which is organised in our institution. I am student of Bechlor of science in nursing at you institute and night course regarding pediatric nursing has been attended by me to grasp more information about this field.
This is an incredible opportunity for me to learn more about various procedures included in curriculum of child health nursing subject. Unfortunately, I faced some problems regarding the attitude of teacher towards teaching and lack of light in the hall. The teacher who teaches us does not provide clear ideas about various tasks. Moreover, there is dim light inside the hall which causes strain on my eyes.
It is the humble request to you to work on there menaces so, all students can grasp useful knowledge and make this time fruitful. Please ask the teacher to give specific information about that field as well as install more lamps inside the course hall. I will be very thankful to you for this generous effort.
Hope to hear you soon
Yours faithfully
Emily
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 218, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion about that field as well as install more lamps inside the course hall. I wil...
^^
Line 21, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to hear you soon Yours faithfully Emily
^^^^
Line 23, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you soon Yours faithfully Emily
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07344632768 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56682528414 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655367231638 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1160342709 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247955521304 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936533755823 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743309179827 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170138999639 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811938034064 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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