You recently went shopping at the local supermarket. When you got home and noticed your bill, you found that you had been charged for items you did not purchase.
Write a letter to the supermarket manager explaining what has happened. Tell the manager how you feel about the error and tell the manager what you would like him/her to do about it.
Dear Michael,
I am writing this letter to convey my concerns regarding overbilling during my recent visit to your superstore.
Let me explain to you in more detail. I went to your store to buy a couple of vegetables as we were having the plan to prepare veg cuisine to invite the Asian family for dinner over the weekend. Due to this, I did purchase mix vegetables from your store including carrot, potato, and capsicum, and paid $ 150 per the receipt. Nevertheless, as soon as I reached home, and handover the plastic bag to my wife when she noticed while looking at the billing receipt that I have been overcharged for items that I didn’t buy such as milk and yogurt. I got very annoyed when I look at my bill because I have been buying glossary items since I moved near to your store, and now I doubt whether I was overbilled all the time. I am going to attach a copy of the receipt along with the letter to figure out the reason why I was charged for the items which I didn’t buy. Besides, I would like you please give your approval to the cashier to pay back the extra amount to me in my next visit to your superstore.
I look forward to hearing from you soon, so I could plan a visit to your shop to retrieve the above-mentioned money.
Best Regards,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 304, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$150'.
Suggestion: $150
... carrot, potato, and capsicum, and paid $ 150 per the receipt. Nevertheless, as soon ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, nevertheless, regarding, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41772151899 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53296882695 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603375527426 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.7844269678 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 16.8248392259 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231890680965 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860673006182 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560195856843 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134940413725 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067605390641 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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