Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money Others however think that these are necessary for individuals and the society Discuss both views and give your opinion
Today, some celebration activities such as wedding parties, birthday parties are ways to remember some important moments. In the past time, these activities were regarded as a way of wasting money. Nowaday, people consider it necessary because they can relax and promote the economic development.
On one side of the argument there are people who argue that the merits of holding these events considerably outweigh it disavantages. The main reason for believing this is that celebration parties are good for individuals, since they have provided people with opportunities to relieve pressure and enrich their life. Therefore, people can fell ore happy after work time. Besides, it is promote the development of economic growth. In fact, holding activities fan help people have a chance to commit together and buildup people's relationships.
One the other hand, the luxurious party are wasting money, because the living cost of them are so high. We can understand that a grand party needs money in many places, such as hiring and decorating rooms, drinks and foods. To illustrade, wedding party is a lifetime occasion, usually invest money to rent a car, photographer, MC or singer. It seems to be pointless to spend money into this type of event, whereas people may face the possibility of being seperated owing to the disagreements occurring in their life.
In conclusion, I believe both arguments have their merits. On balance, however, I feel that parties are important in social life and bring the people together. So, we have to keep the watch on the other aspect of budget involved in holding them so that it does not affect the monetary position of the family.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...remember some important moments. In the past time, these activities were regarded as a wa...
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Line 2, column 386, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'promoted'.
Suggestion: promoted
...e happy after work time. Besides, it is promote the development of economic growth. In ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, may, so, therefore, whereas, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10583941606 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75216604208 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605839416058 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1191115671 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278069002442 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081241640559 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471668470893 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158082599082 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346181519429 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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