After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude.
In your letter:
• introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing
• express your appreciation
• and offer him/ her to visit your home with his/her family
August 20th , 2020
Dear Mr.Brown,
I am writing to express my appreciation for your fearless action. You were so kind to take care of me after I was involved in accident last Friday.
I am Tony, an English teacher at the Vinh Hai secondary school, and live with my family at Vinh Chau town. On my way to work at morning last Friday, my motorbike exhauted of petrol and I could not move to school. If you had not decided to help me, the situation could have been worse. I am so thankful to your kindness. You even took fuel for me and help me to start the motorcycle. I can not express enough how grateful I am to you.
I apologise that I could not thank you enough. My family and wife heard how you assisted me, they are greatly happy. Please accept my invitation to visit our home and let out brief encounter becomes an opportunity to know you more.
Yours truly,
Tony
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Line 2, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Brown
August 20th , 2020 Dear Mr.Brown, I am writing to express my appreciati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 714.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32727272727 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36464008199 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660606060606 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6604628345 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.5 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.75 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.16666666667 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289785718939 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112181567947 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583308322822 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217735059771 0.12726935374 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701277282478 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.