Today more people are overweight than ever before.
What in your opinion are the primary causes of this?
What are the main effects of this epidemic?
Nowadays, obesity is becoming increasingly and is the reason for stress among many people. Persons claim that they are getting more obese unlike earlier. This essay will discuss the reasons why this is happening and what are the consequences of such disorder.
These days people are moving inchmeal towards obesity. This is a perilous state for those who are suffering as they are more prone to many diseases. Main causes for such health epidemic is sedentary lifestyle and unhealthy eating habits. Almost all people relying on cars, bikes instead of walking even for short distance. Today's working culture, from children to adults demands an inactive lifestyle. In spite of, spending the whole day with their busy schedule, they spend their leisure time with such activities which require little or no efforts. For instance, a person's belligerent behaviour can be seen due to putting on weight regularly. Moreover, the imbalance dietary pattern is another cause, this is because of the scarcity of time as human beings depends upon unhealthy outside food, for example, we can see restaurants and hotels are all the rage that every category of people visit these places very often.
Possible effects of gaining weight end to physical health problems, loss of productivity and mental disorder. A large no. Of youngsters and adults are facing heart-related issues as their body contain high cholesterol level that results in the inability of heart functioning properly. Secondly, loss of productivity can be seen ubiquitously in overweight people as they require more efforts to do little physical task. Also, sometimes it leads to mental disorders because losing weight is not low hanging fruit for everyone, it requires physical as well as mental labour. Persons who fail to do so suffer from mental illness as they remain unsuccessful to live the desired lifestyle.
To sum up, obesity is a dangerous disorder of structure and should be prevented to the maximum possible. This essay discussed the inactive lifestyle and imbalanced diet that results in serious physical, mental and loss of productivity problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 566, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, as well as, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33136094675 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66919004008 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609467455621 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.8019872874 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8421052632 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7894736842 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154185425054 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427191358151 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05308496223 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877369140114 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448709978443 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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