Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choices of clothes.Do you agree or disagree?

Essay topics:

Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choices of clothes.

Do you agree or disagree?

Wearing a brand is becoming very popular among all ages. Some people claim that it depicts the traditional and moral values of persons. I completely disagree with the opinion as today's in the world of fashion it is quite difficult to illustrate anybody's character and value according to outfits. This essay will discuss the reasons to support my opinion.

First of all, it would be preposterous to comment on the ethnic wear in the dynamic fashion environment. Needless to say, today's generation lure towards western culture rapidly instead of following own traditional values unlike earlier, people preferred to be in regional's outfits. However, there are certain places where people judge on the basis of choice of clothing. For instance, in villages and backward areas which are not developed yet, people living there with an old mindset. They avoid to accept the changes. Although it does not affect the whole society because almost persons are fashion pro and they love to carry whatever they like.

Secondly, it is well known that Do not judge a book by its cover that proves someone's choice cannot define its character. For example, every politician always well dressed with simplicity but it is hard to say about their loyalty and personality. Furthermore, sometimes the choice of clothes depends upon the circumstances that enforce people to wear according to the situation they are handling as escorts cannot be criticized for what they carry. Only people who are oblivious of trending fashion and culture raise insane comments about outfits.

To sum up, I strongly believe that the choice of clothes does not matter while considering anybody's tradition or character. This essay supported the arguments with reasons and defined why this thinking is unrealistic.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 492, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid accepting'.
Suggestion: avoid accepting
... living there with an old mindset. They avoid to accept the changes. Although it does not affec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, first of all, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26923076923 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62929855949 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618881118881 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.831017893 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1875 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165085204547 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045847801572 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384061866845 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864786387599 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456864395665 0.056905535591 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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