you work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
Say how your work could be done while you are away
Ask for him/her help in arranging it
Dear Jack,
I am writing to you about my decision about how I want to work in London which is the company’s head office in for six months.
As you know, I am working in Istanbul office for five years, I have some problems with my family and I hope to leave my country, should I transfer to head office I have enough time to take a professional training course in London university and it can have a positive effect on my efficiency.
So I request you to kindly permit me to leave the country. If it possible for you tell me to know about how can I request to transfer to head office or tell me about temporary occupation vacancy at the head office.
I should inform you, I can handle my work in Istanbul with my laptop and Katy accept to helps my work for six months.
Thank you for your time and support, I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
John Smith
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...accept to helps my work for six months. Thank you for your time and support, I l...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37125748503 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47652393168 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538922155689 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.8525995695 44.8134815571 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.285714286 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355672557492 0.216113520407 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168897679961 0.0766984524023 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693989625055 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203940631764 0.12726935374 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648200440309 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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