You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
• describe the training course you want to do
• explain what the company could do to help you
• say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Smith,
I am writing about training opportunity that related to my skills in the company.
Canadian accounting association present cost accounting course with foreign tutor who is really experts in Japanese companies methods. The training course will start on 20th September to 25th September, training cost with a meal and transport is 500 dollars. As you know, Japanese companies are really famous in management method to reduce their cost and competitive with western companies.
If it possible please allow me to join in the course and give me some found to pay training fees for the following course.
I have recently been hearing from my friends owing to recent problems in production that we have in the country many compete companies are interested in the course; therefore it is needful to set up some new methods in our company to can increase our production in low costs. Because of Japanese methods very useful how to keep inventory in minimum level or produce based on just in time method that really needful for our company system.
Thank you for your time and support. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Brown
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...he following course. I have recently been hearing from my friends owing to recent problem...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o hearing from you. Yours Faithfully, Brown
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0725388601 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58230773598 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642487046632 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4477820801 44.8134815571 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240357034426 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102966638338 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701726156264 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126702710037 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721478630227 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.