Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Ages are an important issue in human lives, thus, I think the teenage years are the happiest ages in our life; however, some people prefer adult life than teenager ages to enjoy lives.
Some people think human are teenager couldn’t have enough access to have the happiest life because they have limited rights in law. For instance, they couldn’t dive car or use nightclubs; moreover, they can make the decision for life such as vote and marriage. Teenagers should respect school law or their parent's culture in that they spend their time on school and home.
I believe teenager ages the happiest years in humans’ lives because they have not too much responsibility according to social law or legal law, they can spend their time on playing games and go on a picnic. They can enjoy their life without spending time on work. They can learn anything they want and parents and law are protect them against problems; in addition, parents are giving them money to have entertainment, for example, go to the cinema to watching a movie with their friends or classmate. They can spend time with their friends and family and they have enough time for planning for their future and set ambitions for own. Teenagers have the good relationship with each other without too much stress about the society or the economy.
In my opinion, people who think positively have more happiness than other people but in the comparison between ages, people who are younger are happier than older ones, Such as teenager in comparison to adults.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'protected'.
Suggestion: protected
...thing they want and parents and law are protect them against problems; in addition, par...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... movie with their friends or classmate. They can spend time with their friends and f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92692307692 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4410778248 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507692307692 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.716757162 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.1 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228210836696 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100635990381 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825371869502 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175199180798 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685963531895 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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