Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Happiness has always been an important factor in human life regardless of his age. Although when we were young we felt a lot of joy since we were discovering ourselves. I believe that a mature person will also be happy by other events.
In the first hand, there are many reasons that make youngsters happy. Firstly, the lack of responsibilities since teenagers completely relies on their parents. Consequently, no worries will result and specially in regards of financial needs. Secondly, people at this age will start their social life. In other words, this is the perfect age to meet the other sex and try to hang out as much as they can to have fun .For instance, most relationships will be faced for the first time in this period.
on the other hand while teenage years are very important to bring joyousness. Adulthood period is also marked by several events that might bring satisfaction. Starting with parental feeling that will be brought when you have kids. Having children is the perfect blessing that any person can have and that bring the most happiness in the world. Moving to second major event which is building a career, person will feel happy since he finished his education at the university and he can start his job right away. For example, every one of us still remember until today his graduation day honestly it was a lovely experience.
In conclusion, happiness is a good feeling that any person can have in any period in his life. In my opinion , we can’t say that joy appeared more in the childhood period , in fact some events that can happen when we get older are also important .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, honestly, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80427046263 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56938045633 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601423487544 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4797024417 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.375 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5625 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101676313193 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350081054742 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386135853184 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0606058348851 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209562442482 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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