People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
Colleges and universities are crucial those days for career’s development. Although there is many reasons why people should attend them .In my opinion, the most important ones are to have a good job position in the future and to increase your education and social network.
In the first hand, we all agree that attending universities is a must for career’s development. Firstly, you will get all the needed information in your major such as the basic ones; also you will learn about the steps you should follow in order to practice your job. Secondly, sometimes you will get an experience by attending several training. For instance, if you are studying pharmacy, you will have to complete some courses while you are at the hospital and community pharmacies in order to make sure that you are applying the knowledge you learned.
On the other hand, college and university will help you to develop your knowledge and increase your social network. In fact when you attend college you will take several courses related to mathematics for example or biology. Therefore, you will receive the right education about all the domains which will help you to choose your major after. In addition, college and universities will help you develop a lot of friends with whom you will share ideas and personnel experience .Consequently you will be increasing your social network. For example, I have two best friends that I met first in the college and we still meet till today knowing that each one is married and has her own family.
To sum up, people usually attend college and universities for several reasons In my view, the major ones are to have a good job position in the future, increase knowledge and social network.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, such as, in my opinion, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92439862543 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5926326305 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501718213058 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6267686587 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.416666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.6666666667 7.06120827912 236% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354947151308 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162370927817 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820228208761 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260671454502 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494948986114 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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