Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their
employees to the countryside.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Accommodations and cars congestion are considered as two important problems that our society is facing today. His is reflecting directly on individuals where their productivity is decreased in my opinion this issue can be fixed if industries and big companies find another place in the country.
To start with, many people are finding difficulties with their accommodation .Therefore if the industries and some of the biggest companies leave the city, new couples will find easily homes and they can get married since as we all know housing is the major problem before marriage. In addition, the pollution will decrease because the industrial work lead to a lot of chemicals materials that can harm the environment and the people at the same time .Indeed, a friend of mine is suffering from pulmonary problems since he lives behind an electricity factory and he smell the toxic gazes every day.
Moving on to vehicle overload , this is classified as one of the biggest issue that most of the people suffers from. In fact many people come late to their duty since the traffic is too much congested. That’s means by relocating the place of some factories the traffic jam will be less since the employees working their will change their way for example , if someone is working in serum manufacturing institution changing his road will definitely help in releasing congestion and will also increase their effectiveness since they might reach their job faster.
To conclude, finding new areas for construction and fabrication will play a crucial role in fixing many problems related to accommodation and to traffic jam.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, as for, for example, in addition, in fact, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17358490566 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84700861696 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615094339623 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.8126383617 49.4020404114 200% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 171.375 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.125 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125279889768 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569531845095 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290229053356 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768665887498 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020734461377 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.