You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter, » explain why you were at the restaurant » describe the problems »

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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.

Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter,

» explain why you were at the restaurant

» describe the problems

» write about the action you want the manager to take

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to raise a complain about the service that your restaurant is offering. In fact, my best friend told that he was inspired by your place, your service and your international menu. Thus I got excited and I booked my husband birthday .

We were around 10 persons and we arrived on time but unfortunately we didn’t find enough places to sit altogether although the booking was confirmed from your side. The waiters tried to put some tables together to fix the issue but still we didn’t feel relaxed. In addition, some of our friends are vegetarian and they didn’t eat anything since as reported by your staff vegetarian menu are not served on Saturday evening and I was not informed before.

I think the least you can do to solve the problem is to give my money back since I didn’t find the service that I was expecting. Moreover , some of my friends were left without food which is not acceptable

Looking forward to hear from you soon

Yours faithfully

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...am, I am writing this letter to raise a complain about the service that your restaurant ...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...In fact, my best friend told that he was inspired by your place, your service and...
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Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...inspired by your place, your service and your international menu. Thus I got exci...
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Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...r service and your international menu. Thus I got excited and I booked my husband b...
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Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...excited and I booked my husband birthday . We were around 10 persons and we a...
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Line 11, column 143, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e service that I was expecting. Moreover , some of my friends were left without f...
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Line 11, column 153, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that I was expecting. Moreover , some of my friends were left without food which ...
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Line 11, column 212, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eft without food which is not acceptable Looking forward to hear from you soon ...
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Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ch is not acceptable Looking forward to hear from you soon Yours faithfully
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, moreover, so, still, thus, i think, in addition, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85227272727 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68137068849 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659090909091 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.6224999231 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.75 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 4.34317383033 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172630459541 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733599276063 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056457956833 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103052397072 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378695570104 0.0580467560999 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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