You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter,oexplain why you were at the restaurantodescribe the problemsowrite about

Essay topics:

You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.

Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter,

o explain why you were at the restaurant

o describe the problems

o write about the action you want the manager to take

Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to draw your kind attention that the disappointment which we had while visiting your restaurant.

Let me explain my situation in more detail that I recently tried your cuisine when I was exhausted after a long day work and I thought it is a better idea to visit your place so that I can give quality time to my family as I was completely occupied in that week.

I would like to inform you that the dishes we ordered, were not delicious some were having more salt and some were more spicy.In fact service was horrible as no one was there to serve us because everyone was engaged with other customers.

I could suggest some noteworthy points where you need to address such as try to hire more staff for your business and choose your staff as per the skills particularly in the kitchen. Also I want to take proper action about what we faced.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Iqbal

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ving more salt and some were more spicy.In fact service was horrible as no one was...
^^
Line 17, column 184, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...the skills particularly in the kitchen. Also I want to take proper action about what...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, while, in fact, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67630057803 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43467219997 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.687861271676 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.1098572169 44.8134815571 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.571428571 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 16.8248392259 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229238588948 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981535538198 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369726267987 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114882466576 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309199908099 0.0580467560999 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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