You recently received a letter from your friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think she/he should get a job:
- Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
- Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
- Suggest the types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Sajad,
I am writing to let you know about my recommendation whether to search for a job or go for higher studies.
let me explain my situation in more detail that going to college is sort of boring thing as you recently finished your graduation which kept you engaged all the time. this results no entertainment which made your life dull.
having a job and meeting new people will definitely give new experience, assists you in implementing what you have learned in under-graduate course. Therefore, develops your broader vision and aids in understanding work-culture which takes to smartness as it depends on practical experience. Hence, you will have more power to appreciate this world which leads to success.
I would prefer to go into Traffic field which is having more boom in the market and have less saturation. this also leads to financial growth.
let me know about your decision.
Your friend,
Iqbal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, therefore, sort of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16883116883 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82831531403 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675324675325 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5637221731 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203460035366 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749776469345 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670518073408 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112909673365 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726192373502 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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