You recently attended a series of English lessons in a language school. However, you were unhappy with the teaching quality.
Write a letter to the director of the school. In your letter:
• explain why you chose to study English at the school
• describe the problems you had with the lessons
• suggest how the classes could be improved
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to draw your kind attention that I have recently completed my English language course in your school. and t
let me explain my situation in more detail that attending lectures in your school was requirement to have strong command in speaking proficiency. Furthermore, it will be helpful while communicating with others.
Although there are plethora of difficulties which I faced during my classes namely less visual aids, lack of group discussions which I was expecting will be more than delivering theoretical. moreover, classrooms are not that much spacious.
I would like to suggest some points to you so that you will try to focus on those hurdles.Firstly, add up graphics, arrange team discussions.Classroom area is congested and need to be widened spaces in between chairs or to be shifted to other class.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Iqbal
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Firstly
... you will try to focus on those hurdles.Firstly, add up graphics, arrange team discussi...
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...d up graphics, arrange team discussions.Classroom area is congested and need to be widene...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42666666667 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22353153475 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.74 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.5317675559 44.8134815571 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 4.34317383033 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186553712101 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069865129279 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598762901478 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100092951522 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656664922222 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 8.71597938144 163% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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