Your local hospital has advertised people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time.
Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter
explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital
say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do
give details of when you would be available for this work
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know that I would enjoy while working in your hospital as a volunteer.
let me explain my situation in more detail that I am interested in this work since my childhood but could not able to do because of busy schedule.Now, I am free and would like to serve patients in the hospital.
Things such as taking patients from one place to another and in fact I have driving license so carrying them from other branch of the hospital to this will not have any problem.Another point which I try to elaborate that I do not have any difficulty if you assign me any job over there.
Therefore, I will be available from Monday to Friday in day time and for rest of the days I will be engaged with my family.So, please feel free to contact me any time in the mentioned days and do let me know when I have to start.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Mohmad Iqbal.
Comments
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...pital to this will not have any problem.Another point which I try to elaborate that I d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, therefore, while, in fact, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4375 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51364432639 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596590909091 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.849998551 44.8134815571 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 130.166666667 76.5299724578 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 16.8248392259 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 4.34317383033 242% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209300029563 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109070308548 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065137923117 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117803332332 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082363956607 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 7.45979381443 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.