Write a letter to the governor of a local city council who is planning to pull down a historical building in your local area due to the lack of money to repair it. Explain:
Why the building is important?
What can be done with it in future?
How to raise money for repairing it?
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to draw your kind attention to the recent proposal of demolishing the historical building in our area.
Let me explain my situation in more detail that the structure in our locality is an ancient and tourists visit this place often. it is been seen that visiting travelers here in this region is because of this monument and supports locals to earn some money by which they are able to fulfil their day-to-day needs.
I would like to suggest in future that it can be used as tourism spot officially where all the travelers should have the facilities of eating and ought to have some fun activities there. Therefore, motivates travellers to come frequently which assist government in long run.
If it is possible to get loan from private entities and persuade the investors that you will have share in it. I hope this will surely support both public and law enforcement agencies.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Iqbal.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 130, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...nt and tourists visit this place often. it is been seen that visiting travelers he...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07784431138 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63970678677 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.724550898204 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3693359474 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2222222222 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143627607641 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481659545969 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398514206895 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681398130639 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503391523499 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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