Write a letter to the governor of a local city council who is planning to pull down a historical building in your local area due to the lack of money to repair it. Explain:Why the building is important?What can be done with it in future?How to raise money

Essay topics:

Write a letter to the governor of a local city council who is planning to pull down a historical building in your local area due to the lack of money to repair it. Explain:

Why the building is important?
What can be done with it in future?
How to raise money for repairing it?

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my views in regards to your decision of demolishing an ancient building i.e. "The Fort". I understand that the council has arrived at the decision after a thoughtful deliberation and as a result of non-availability of funds for the maintenance. But there are several social and emotional aspects attached to this monument.

Let me explain to you that this is a unique piece of construction due to its structure & design and only of its kind remain. It holds a significant importance in the history of our nation as this was used in monitoring the city walls and was paramount in the defense of the locality. Our ancestors had told us great stories about the pivotal role of this structure whenever the invaders raid the old city.

I would like to make a few suggestions by which this historical building can be saved. For example, the council can turn it to an exhibition center by displaying the old artifacts related to this building. Another use of this could be a "Public Library", as a result, the youth of the locality can be drawn towards reading and learning about this splendid piece of construction.

The council can seek support from the central government for the rehabilitation. Alternatively, the residents of the locality can contribute to preserving this magnificent fort and I am happy to donate $1000 for it. I can certainly urge the people around my circle to fund the conservation. I hope that you will reconsider the decision by implementing proposed solutions.

Thanking you in anticipation

Yours faithfully,

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...am, I am writing to express my views in regards to your decision of demolishing an ancient...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 236, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... building. Another use of this could be a 'Public Library', as a result...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 937.175257732 144% => OK
No of words: 266.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05639097744 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17838316469 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 127.690721649 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609022556391 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 290.88556701 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7034616502 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0714285714 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64285714286 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158258200739 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501450463467 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386337562848 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0711651221245 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428316841906 0.0580467560999 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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