You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
• Describe a training course you want to do
• Explain what the company could do to help you
• Say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you that I have come across with an advertisement for various training courses and these courses are being arranged by an institute which is quite famous for imparting such skills at a competitive rate.
The training course for which I am particularly interested is "Excel Dashboard Training Course". This is 7-days rigorous course aimed for advanced users of Excel, who are entrusted with 'Management Reporting' responsibilities. I believe that this course will enhance my professional skills.
Let me explain that how the company can support in this regard. I understand and abide policy for 4-days paid leave for such training but if you can approve 7-days leave with pay, I will be able to better concentrate and complete the training.
This course could benefit me in presenting different scenarios interactively and aid us in better decision making. I can train my subordinate staff after completion of this course so that they can improve their efficiency. Furthermore, this will enable us to screen out projects which do not meet KPIs established by the Board.
Thank you for your kind consideration
Yours faithfully,
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30526315789 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04579997815 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668421052632 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2771200408 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.8 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384496928146 0.216113520407 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140066239616 0.0766984524023 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992247464728 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218014069148 0.12726935374 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797741165555 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 8.71597938144 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.