On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
• Describe the item you lost
• Explain how you lost it
• Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you that I have lost my camera during the recent trip to Singapore and Malaysia. The camera was bought just a week before my travel and fortunately, I have insured all the belongings of the visit by paying a premium to your company.
Let me explain to you that the road trip from Singapore to Malaysia was included in my itinerary and the device must have gone missing in the bus. As a result, all of the captured memories of the tropical island were lost with the camera. Furthermore, a formal complaint was lodged with the bus company but sadly nothing was found in that bus. I am enclosing the original request and the travel company’s official response for your reference.
I would like to request you to compensate me with the full price of the instrument as it was under the coverage. The actual receipts of the purchase are attached for your kind perusal, please.
Thank you for your consideration
Yours faithfully,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...e gone missing in the bus. As a result, all of the captured memories of the tropical islan...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67246516121 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4144501316 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7777777778 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262176998388 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104249640234 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706003672263 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1717603083 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712452503567 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.