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On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company in your letterDescribe the item you lostExplain how you lost itTell the insura

Essay topics: On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company in your letter

Describe the item you lost

Explain how you lost it

Tell the insurance company what would like them to do

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Dear Sir: David Fort

I am writing regarded with a lost, taken place during my holiday. The item is my lap-top. It was a new one and the model was the last manufactured by Apple Company: A83938, 2018. it was in silver and packed in its grey pack. There was a scratch mark at the bottom at right however it didn’t have any deficiency. As I claimed I bought it for 2000$.

The aspiring point is that I didn’t carried the speaker system which always accompanied with it.

On January 5th , I embarked a travel to Canada supposed to last for 8 days. The packages transferred to the hotel by travel agency’s staff. Since we were allowed to have any item at the weight of bellow7 kg with ourselves during the flight, therefore I had my suitcase containing my lap-top with myself. Arriving hotel, I realized I have lost my lap-top.

Two days after reporting the lost to the travel agency, they said there is not any in their “lost and found” section.

I recall that I had made a contract with your agency 3 months ago, and lap-top was included to the valuable items. Hence I would like to ask you to compensate the cost of that. My contract number is 4447568B adjusted on 14th, July, 2019. I am in your disposal all weekdays after 5 pm. I look forward hearing from you as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...actured by Apple Company: A83938, 2018. it was in silver and packed in its grey pa...
^^
Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$2000'.
Suggestion: $2000
...eficiency. As I claimed I bought it for 2000$. The aspiring point is that I did...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ys accompanied with it. On January 5th , I embarked a travel to Canada supposed ...
^^
Line 9, column 29, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'travel'.
Suggestion: travel
... with it. On January 5th , I embarked a travel to Canada supposed to last for 8 days. ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 151, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tel by travel agency's staff. Since we were allowed to have any item at the...
^^
Line 9, column 185, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Since we were allowed to have any item at the weight of bellow7 kg with ourselv...
^^
Line 15, column 116, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...top was included to the valuable items. Hence I would like to ask you to compensate t...
^^^^^
Line 15, column 227, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'July 2019'.
Suggestion: July 2019
...ct number is 4447568B adjusted on 14th, July, 2019. I am in your disposal all weekdays aft...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... as soon as possible. Yours faithfully
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, look, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60416666667 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60551178365 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629166666667 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9928671803 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1176470588 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.05882352941 4.34317383033 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.94845360825 253% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185652687126 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550567346021 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485097380789 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724453500496 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577854033492 0.0580467560999 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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