On a recent holiday you lost the valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company in your letter describe the item you lost, explain how you lost it, tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I, Jane Smith, one of your customers have bought a travel insurance from your firm and my trip to Istanbul, since 2 weeks ago. It contained lost items, too. Unfortunately, in this journey I lost my Swatch watch, on which I was keen. It is a timepiece which is made from silver and some precious stones are applied on it.
As I received Istanbul at 10 o'clock, I had it around my wrist, yet. Then I went to take my luggage, that a passenger, who wanted to take his own luggage was unable to hold it, next to me. When his bag passed me, he still tried to hold it and threw himself on it. Consequently, he made me faint on the floor. This event made some other tourists to fall down. This accident not only made me injured and felt painfully, but also caused my beloved watch to be opened and lost.
I am writing to you to ask you for the fifth section of our appointment according to which I should be paid the item’s value up to $5,000. Meanwhile, the timepiece’s worth was $2,000. As you see, it is lower than the maximum level of payment in the contract.
To wrap up, I appreciate you if I get $2,000 payment for my Swatch watch that is lost in the travel to Istanbul, soon.
Faithfully Yours,
Jane Smith.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...d on it. As I received Istanbul at 10 oclock, I had it around my wrist, yet. Then I ...
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Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ould be paid the item's value up to ,000. Meanwhile, the timepiece's wor...
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Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...eanwhile, the timepiece's worth was ,000. As you see, it is lower than the ma...
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Line 9, column 38, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... To wrap up, I appreciate you if I get ,000 payment for my Swatch watch that is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, still, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32478632479 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51497451141 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632478632479 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2674418524 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.4666666667 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215259549741 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611754799673 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644883515056 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139762979414 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579777176678 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.