Modern technology is changing our world. this has advantages such as bringing people closer together through communication. It also has disadvantages such as destroying the differences between cultures .to what extent do you agree or disagree with this st

Essay topics: Modern technology is changing our world. this has advantages such as bringing people closer together through communication. It also has disadvantages such as destroying the differences between cultures .to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Universe is altering these days due to new technology which is developing day by day .simultaneously human benefiting to a great extent this issue , for instance, new softwares has made communicate easier .on the contrary,it is changing cultures in a way that all the world seems united in term of cultural cohesion.i disagree with this negative point of view to technology.

Technology serves people with variety aspects of life .in each context such as transportation, administrative affairs, social communication. by this tree, people have been more aware of each other, send their opinions and thoughts about major issues in society. high-speed transportation has made it easy to visit and trade all around the world. People learn a new trend of lives during these trips, for instance some new receipts, new styles for clothing, and new horizons will broaden their mind. they will be more familiar with other people's point of view about some so-called issues like veil, violence against women ,discrimination ….

People innately have a tendency to keep up their ancestors trend of life and keep it and pass down to future generation without any change. It consider it a kind of origination for them .however it is essential to have a rich culture and not just maintaining it disregarding content. every culture has its own weakness and strength and today people bring out to take advantages of technology to share them and receiving feedbacks from universe .cultural cohesion will be beneficial for making a sense of unity between people around the world . some inequalities like racism wont be exist any more.bear in mind how justified world it could be!

In conclusion , there is no reason to restrict interaction and transmission of cultural values between nations, since they promote human values and principle ethics and make the universe a peaceful place for dwellers

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the contrary, to a great extent

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24342105263 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89164232721 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.4324340702 49.4020404114 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.4 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189428687324 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068643905942 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561358242915 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104006823647 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043921989136 0.056905535591 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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