You were unable to attend an important meeting at which you were supposed to make a presentation
Write to the chairman
Explain your absence
Suggest alternative arrangements for presentation
I am writing regarded with the meeting held on Tuesday April 6th, I had undertaken the responsibility for present some statistics associated with recent financial profits in last 5 years in our company. I do apologize about this absence and certainly it must have made lots of difficulties for you and collaborators, I assure I will make it up as soon as possible.
Some mismanagement lead to my absence, however I know no justification would be acceptable, in fact, I had been well-prepared for presenting my data, I put it to my lap-top through my flash, on Tuesday morning when I wanted to re-check my presentation, I found out there isn’t any file, all of it was removed due to some virus that infected my lap-top. I should have a computer assistant to have it repair earlier.
I assume, I will be able to sum up this data once again very soon, therefore I would like to ask for another arrangement for this purpose, I there is any suitable vacancy in your time-table, I eagerly will come for presenting.
The meeting on last Tuesday canceled because of my flaw, I would be pleased if you let me know whether there is an other chance to make it up.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Dear Sir….. I am writing regarded with the meetin...
Line 7, column 405, Rule ID: IT_VBZ
Message: Did you mean 'repairs'?
...ld have a computer assistant to have it repair earlier. I assume, I will be able to ...
Line 11, column 113, Rule ID: AN_OTHER
Message: Did you mean 'another'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
...sed if you let me know whether there is an other chance to make it up. Yours faithfull...
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...nce to make it up. Yours faithfully
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, well, in fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70754716981 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.981952956 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641509433962 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 16.3608247423 214% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.60126596 44.8134815571 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.333333333 76.5299724578 217% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 35.3333333333 16.8248392259 210% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 4.34317383033 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141832329443 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623288473434 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477487604706 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900774017402 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440778608894 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
automated_readability_index: 18.4 8.37731958763 220% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 70.7449484536 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 7.45979381443 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 8.62886597938 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 8.54432989691 187% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 8.15463917526 196% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.