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you are going to take a holyday .write to a friend asking him /her look after your house.in the letter say where and when you gotell your friend what needs to be done while you are away arrange to meet your friend before you go

Essay topics: you are going to take a holyday .write to a friend asking him /her look after your house.in the letter

say where and when you go

tell your friend what needs to be done while you are away

arrange to meet your friend before you go

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Dear

I hope you are well and had lovely trip to Toronto and came back without any difficulties.

Next week 14th July,I am going to a field trip with a group of students in our college to do research for my environmental crisis course.I will be there for 2 weeks.therefore I have to get some one to look after some of affairs for me while I am abroad.

First of all my landlord is going to come and check some items that has been damaged during last snowstorm. He will come on Monday at 12 am.after that I am worry about my pet .it should be taken to veterinary office on Tuesday at 5 pm..

I wonder if you do a favour and handle these for me.please drop me a line if you don’t mind so.it would be better if I visit you before I leave.in this case I can explain what to do exactly.as you know I am at home all day long recently due to my assignment.

I appreciate your kindness in advance and look forward hearing from you as soon as possible.

Bye for now

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'tripped'.
Suggestion: tripped
...ar I hope you are well and had lovely trip to Toronto and came back without any di...
^^^^
Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
... any difficulties. Next week 14th July,I am going to a field trip with a group ...
^^
Line 5, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ulties. Next week 14th July,I am going to a field trip with a group of students...
^^
Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...arch for my environmental crisis course.I will be there for 2 weeks.therefore I h...
^
Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...ere for 2 weeks.therefore I have to get some one to look after some of affairs for me wh...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the affairs') or simply say ''some affairs''.
Suggestion: some of the affairs; some affairs
...re I have to get some one to look after some of affairs for me while I am abroad. First o...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 158, Rule ID: I_AM_WORRY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worried'?
Suggestion: worried
...come on Monday at 12 am.after that I am worry about my pet .it should be taken to vet...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 176, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...12 am.after that I am worry about my pet .it should be taken to veterinary office ...
^^
Line 9, column 217, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
....it should be taken to veterinary office on Tuesday at 5 pm.. I wonder if you d...
^^
Line 9, column 237, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...to veterinary office on Tuesday at 5 pm.. I wonder if you do a favour and handl...
^^
Line 11, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n't mind so.it would be better if I visit you before I leave.in this case I...
^^
Line 11, column 135, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd so.it would be better if I visit you before I leave.in this case I can explai...
^^
Line 13, column 42, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... appreciate your kindness in advance and look forward hearing from you as soon as...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, you know, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21276595745 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5271276036 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670212765957 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.8929698298 44.8134815571 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.142857143 76.5299724578 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 16.8248392259 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 4.34317383033 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200274365458 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812317975816 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073976013914 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110721452132 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681188004273 0.0580467560999 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 70.7449484536 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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