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A friend invited you to a special party. you intended to go but at the last minute you were unable to attend. write a letter to your friend. in your letterApologize for not attending the partyExplain what prevented you from going suggest a way of making

Essay topics: A friend invited you to a special party. you intended to go but at the last minute you were unable to attend. write a letter to your friend. in your letter

Apologize for not attending the party

Explain what prevented you from going

suggest a way of making up for this.

kaveh1356's picture

Dear Sara

I was really surprised when I heard you have your baby last month, and here I am writing to apology because I didn't attend in your new-born baby's celebration. there had ben no see for a long time after we graduated from university, and it could be an excellent chance to have lots of fun like college days and get refreshed.

I enthusiastically, purchased some lovely presents for the little angel! and I impatiently was waiting for the date, however some problems came up at my workplace with one of my colleagues, I owe her a lot, because she had offered me lots of support and help every time I was In trouble.it was not fair to turn her down, I accept to aid her with high work load while it was the exact time I was heading to come your house.

I hope I could make up this loss, I arranged for a party at this weekend, it would not take long until midnight, so, it will suits you, and please bring your baby, all of the guests would be cheerful by seeing your cute baby. if you accept, I will invite other people who are almost all our ex-fellow students in college and you are well familiar with them. drop me a line and let me know. I am waiting hearing from you

lots of loves

Sahar

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... here I am writing to apology because I didnt attend in your new-born babys celebrati...
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Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...end in your new-born babys celebration. there had ben no see for a long time after we...
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Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...e lovely presents for the little angel! and I impatiently was waiting for the date,...
^^^
Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'suit'
Suggestion: suit
...t take long until midnight, so, it will suits you, and please bring your baby, all of...
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Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... suits you, and please bring your baby, all of the guests would be cheerful by seeing your...
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Line 7, column 227, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...d be cheerful by seeing your cute baby. if you accept, I will invite other people ...
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Line 7, column 359, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Drop
...ge and you are well familiar with them. drop me a line and let me know. I am waiting...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so, thus, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26406926407 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38954764959 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632034632035 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 16.3608247423 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.165362254 44.8134815571 268% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.714285714 76.5299724578 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 16.8248392259 196% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2109043853 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100887682444 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709608591551 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142841554635 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795152587219 0.0580467560999 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 8.37731958763 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.02 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 8.54432989691 178% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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