You are the member of an environmental protection society which is organizing a “clean -up” weekendWrite a letter to the headmaster of your local school. .in your letterAsk for students’ helpExplain what activities will be involvedExplain how useful

Essay topics: You are the member of an environmental protection society which is organizing a “clean -up” weekend

Write a letter to the headmaster of your local school. .in your letter

Ask for students’ help

Explain what activities will be involved

Explain how useful it will be for the community as a whole.

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Dear sir /madam

I am one the residents dwelling nearby your high school. And working as a volunteer at “Environmental protection society” our committee has been decided to apply further labour force to fulfill the aim of clean-up weekend, since young people will be the most energetic and enthusiast of other age-groups, we would like to ask you to encourage pupils to coöperate us.

Being high demanded, It is essential for students to be in proper physical condition without any allergic disease like asthma. Activities include: accumulating waste disposal thrown away by people in natural areas like forests, rivers, seashore, after that they will be transferred to landfill and buried .and finally the most educational part is to separating sustainable materials and paper from plastics and not recyclable glasses.

By this weekend clean-up activity children will have the chance to learn more about environmental issues, and as future generation it is crucial for them to be well-educated about the importance of keeping our earth clean.

yours sincerely

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, thus, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53892215569 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0680077677 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.754491017964 0.547539520022 138% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.271780299 43.030603864 268% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.0 112.824112599 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4 22.9334400587 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257587555131 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112045247914 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515732753033 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148921798011 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656180516948 0.0819641961636 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 13.2329268293 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 61.2550243902 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 11.4140731707 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.85 8.06136585366 135% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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