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You are unhappy about a plan t make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights.You live near the airport.Write a letter to your local newspaper. .in your letter Explain where you liveDescribe the problemGive reasons why you do not want t

Essay topics: You are unhappy about a plan t make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights.

You live near the airport.

Write a letter to your local newspaper. .in your letter

Explain where you live

Describe the problem

Give reasons why you do not want this development.

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Dear sir/madam

I am one of the dwellers nearby "Sparta airport" the airports that is in "turkey air force" 's possession .there are not excessive flights in this airport now and all the flights are on a regular schedule during day.

We recently have informed that,government is going to develop this airport to a public airliner within next year. it means there will be lots of flights down to Antalya. since there are an enormous population of passengers to this area especially in tourist seasons,it will make some inconveniences for people living nearby.

First,the noise pollution that causes negative affects on children' s function at school. they would not be able to concentrate on their subjects despite of the acoustic insulators applied in house's walls and windows. On the other hand, it will threaten safety of our children in road which are not constructed for huge number of people who are going be transferred from airport to city centre.

I ask for residents who are against developing local airport, contact with me on 555-5555 or write to the local council to stop this project before it is too late.

Yours faithfully

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ellers nearby 'Sparta airport' the airports that is in 'turkey ai...
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...apos;turkey air force' s possession .there are not excessive flights in this...
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...ot excessive flights in this airport now and all the flights are on a regular sc...
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...in this airport now and all the flights are on a regular schedule during day. ...
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...ng day. We recently have informed that,government is going to develop this airport to a p...
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...evelop this airport to a public airliner within next year. it means there will be...
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...o city centre. I ask for residents who are against developing local airport...
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...efore it is too late. Yours faithfully
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, well, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13612565445 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90050465906 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685863874346 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.968391291 44.8134815571 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.625 76.5299724578 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110714415146 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04775866128 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514716172643 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0553601808851 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022809680348 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 8.37731958763 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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