You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights.You live near the airport.Write a letter to your local newspaper.In your letter: Explain where you live Describe the problem Give reasons why you don't want this development.
Dear Sir,
I am a citizen of Tehran.I am writing a letter of dissatisfaction with you about the operation of this airport.In the news that I saw from this airport in your newspaper. The airport manager has decided to increase the number of flights at the airport.
I live near Mehrabad International Airport in Tehran. My home and 200 others are near this airport and we tolerate a lot of noise when landing and taking off especially at night.As the number of flights increases, the available noise increases and our rest time decreases.
And on the other hand, the traffic on my way home from work has increased and I have to get out of my house as soon as possible to get to my workplace on time.And also because of the high traffic I have to waste a lot of time in the road.
Here is a small park where neighborhood people spend their days playing with kids and exchanging neighborhood news. As the airport expands, the park will be demolished. Neighborhoods, especially children, will withstand much pressure.
If this new airport plan is not implemented, all residents of the area will be at ease. If you agree with me, print an article about the disadvantages of expanding the airport in your newspaper.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible
Yours faithfully,
Daniali
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85087719298 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85044531142 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565789473684 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.9142141897 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.545454545 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273263231239 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106916550861 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877744605655 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130031523466 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0994315397787 0.0580467560999 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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