Television is a very powerful medium of influence over large populations .there are many positive aspects to television. For example, it is educational tool. However many people feel that it is doing irreparable harm.Present argumentation to highlight you

Essay topics: Television is a very powerful medium of influence over large populations .there are many positive aspects to television. For example, it is educational tool. However many people feel that it is doing irreparable harm.

Present argumentation to highlight your opinion on this matter.

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Bob tub has a gigantic impact on people all around the world. watching television is accompanied with lots of progressing options, for instance, there are variety kinds of programs which are virtually training people in different contexts. However it is said that irreversible effects would brought about in result of watching television.

Since years that television has come to our houses, people have been beneficiary of watching and enjoying being social despite of being alone, besides ordinary people who are used to television and it is an appealing entertainment for them, there are three types of people who benefit from television.

First, housewives who spend lots of time doing house hold chores, they can learn a lot about new recipes, how to prepare healthy nutritional for family and upbringing children, the second group is related with people in their elderly ages who have plenty of leisure time, they learn the ways to living more happily and how to do self-care ,deterring hopelessness and loneliness from their mind. Finally third categories concerned with disordered people. Once again benefit with entertaining and getting equinted with the world around and news.

On the contrary, scientist’s seriously are emphasizing to avoid people from watching more than specific hours for people with different age groups. There are some evidences which prove that sitting long hours in front of television bring about some problems like: eye irritation, sight weakness and inefficiencies in brain function. Therefore there would be two vulnerable people: children in their early childhood and pregnant women.

In conclusion, it wouldn’t be fair to disregard the eye-caching assistance of this magic box provides for people, however it is better to avoid excessive hours in front of that due to its probable damages.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Watching
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Suggestion: However,
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...epare healthy nutritional for family and upbringing children, the second group is...
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...ing more happily and how to do self-care ,deterring hopelessness and loneliness fr...
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Suggestion: Finally,
...essness and loneliness from their mind. Finally third categories concerned with disorde...
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.... On the contrary, scientist's seriously are emphasizing to avoid peopl...
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...like: eye irritation, sight weakness and inefficiencies in brain function. Theref...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46875 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83180105626 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618055555556 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.285295512 49.4020404114 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 143.181818182 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112211518604 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402548461016 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326950665156 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066152798986 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293189254984 0.056905535591 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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