The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest.
The advent of the internet has revolutionized the modes of sharing and accessing data which was of unheard earlier. Like many other useful inventions, the ease and speed of sharing information encompass some difficulties as well. I would like to discuss a few such problems and suggest some remedies.
The internet has evolved to a level nowadays that we can share hundreds of thousands pages data in a blink of an eye. This is why the data or subscribed accounts at a common platform pose a great threat if hackers manage to get access to it. For example, various websites require us to fill in a form and provide personal sensitive information such as credit card details, secret questions, and passwords etc. Furthermore, e-banking and online shopping are quite popular these days which provides an opportunity for hackers to steal our personal details.
If all such websites and e-platforms are not properly secured, the hackers might get entry to the secret details and use it in stealing money or permitting unauthorized transfers of money from one account to another. As a result, many such instances are a routine part of newspapers. A complex password pattern with combinations of words, upper/lower case, and a special character could deter an attack aimed at stealing of sensitive information. Another solution could be a mixture of firewalls and antivirus at the server level could infiltrate such spree.
The other major drawback caused by the internet is an addiction to social networking. Many students and workers are wasting their precious time on Facebook, Twitter, and other such pages, to get to know about others. Resultantly, some students do not qualify their exams while employees are losing their employment. The possible remedy is to limit the time spent on the internet and give time to family relationships.
I strongly believe that engaging in meaningful activities will be more beneficial for all of us instead of wasting time on internet
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, well, while, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13312693498 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85714737581 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600619195046 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7359135418 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.625 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11135770124 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371519361201 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379839939961 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0621137559298 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039723007156 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.