None can deny that technology has enhanced our life in many ways. The advancement of the internet has led our lives to the betterment even though it possesses challenges that are grown in recent times. The ill-effects of the internet and viable solutions are discussed in the following essay.
Firstly, data are not secured completely by the internet providers. Even though, many anti-virus software’s are available in the market, they do not provide 100% security to the information uploaded. Because of this, piracy, data theft and hacking are in place globally. Furthermore, people tend to be technology driven even for trivial things in-spite of their educational qualification. For instance, for performing a simple math, we rely on calculator rather than our mental calculation which our ancestors were following for ages. This clearly depicts how internet ruins our life in multiple ways.
However, we can reduce the negative effects of the internet by following few actionable items such as installing anti-virus applications in our gadgets and setting up passwords for our confidential documents. Besides these, we can encrypt the emails while sending to the intended recipients. Take an example of Dubai where email encryption is mandatory even though the email is public in nature and it reduced email hacking by 50% in a month. Hence, by implementing these plans our data will be secured as well as safely placed in the internet.
To sum up, even though internet usage has some bottlenecks, it can be eliminated if used properly. It is also suggested that network providers pass few parameters like two-way authentication and one-time password for bank transactions for the information to be placed in the world wide internet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 276, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
...for the information to be placed in the world wide internet.
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 276, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
...for the information to be placed in the world wide internet.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, then, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32014388489 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98185817643 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607913669065 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4289195107 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123591473124 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473200994679 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386793498873 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894950031777 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385190174099 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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