To the Director of the City Museum,
I am Windy, pursuing my post-graduation at the University of Charlotte. I am writing to you to express my passion on applying for a job of computer operator in the City Museum. As my holidays are approaching in next month, I can afford to work for couple of months. I am doing my second year in Masters in Computer Engineering at the University since April 2017 and have completed the first semester exam recently. Eventually I have free hours for next couple of months and would like to take up this opportunity.
Since I am pretty close by the City Museum, I can work on flexible timings. Also, I was working as a part-time computer operator in one of the well-known museums in India for 4 years. I have multi-linguistic skills which includes English, French, Hindi and German. Hence I think I am fit for this position in which I can exhibit my computer expertise and communication skills. Additionally, I can handle accounts too as I have done a course in Accountancy. This will precursor for more visitors to the City museum. Please find enclosed resume along with this letter.
Yours’ faithfully,
Chitra Gomathy.
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flaws:
For essays in task I, better to give one paragraph for one requirement:
•introduce yourself - one paragraph
•explain what experience and special skills you have - one paragraph
•explain why you are interested in the job - one paragraph
to have better organizations.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 201 250
No. of Characters: 928 1200
No. of Different Words: 120 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.765 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.617 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.877 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 67 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 46 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 36 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.357 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.887 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.214 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.381 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.573 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.106 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4